Late Post, I Should be Stoned

Turnitin.com Thoughts: As stated by Dr. Forman, the main issue with my essay was the idea being told to the audience. Aside from awkward sentences here and there and all the minor stuff, the ideas were straying. And yes, after reading it over with a new perspective, it does seem that my main point began to stray. To better improve my paper, I will construct my sentences more elegantly, not overuse quotes, and portray my thesis' influence is strongly felt throughout the essay.